jueves, 26 de mayo de 2011

“ You are my smile” RAMON VEGA

I was so sad in a period of depression,

There was no sense in my life destination,

I feel very alone in my room of desolation,

There was anybody who understands what I mention;

But I start looking for a solution,

And I got this as an ambition,

Then you appear in my life,

And you put a shine on my eyes,

In that moment I feel happy,

And with wishes to live,

And that will continue in this way,

Until the day you leave away;

Now I’m not sad any more,

I am happy all away,

Because I have reasons to smile,

That same reason is yourself.

2 comentarios:

  1. Nice Song Dude....
    The Words Are Not So Rhythmic But It Still Beening A Nice Song...
    The Creativity... Well Kind Of Traducted But The Words You Chage Make A Great Rhythm.

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  2. Good job, strictly going to the point, i think the creativity was obviously the principal item you took into acount, but i would fix some stuff at the end of the song try to get it more middlemost.

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